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It's a nice shot, well composed and gorgeous model. The biggest thing to take care of, however, is the lighting. It appears the light on the model is a bit harsh. Did you use camera flash? To light an indoor shot like this, the trick is lamps and any natural light you can get. You definitely don't want to be able to see the oil on the model's face. The vignette can be a nice effect, but you want to make it look more natural by not making it too dramatic. Too much and it becomes too obvious it's a Photoshop =P

Still, I quite like the shot. It drew my attention which is always good! Keep at it!
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Nope, no flash ^^ I bought an Alienbee flash head. I guess the power was a bit too high but I think her face looks like that because of the noise I put in it. This image came out a bit blurry so I was kind of trying to fix that just a tad. The vignette looks okay on my screen or maybe it's just that I think it looks okay hehe ^^ Thank you so much :hug:

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